sunlight

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fritzliesela

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SUNLIGHT

(text 1985 cvb)


sunlight in the morning
when the new day will begin
finish is the time of dreaming
in the land of fantasy

I open my closed eyes for the reality
I wish that the night-dreams trueness will be

moonlight in the evening
when the daytime start to leave
night is closing my eyes
for the dreams which comes to me

they spend me some hours away from reality
so softly they bring me in the land of fantasy

so the times are changing
every day and every night
dreams let me forget
all the daytimes fight

(passt auf die Melodie: Ballade pour Adelaine)
 

La Luna

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Hallo Fritzliesela,

ein nettes Gedicht hast du geschrieben. Ziemlich verträumt, aber das gefällt mir. :eek:)
Allerdings haben sich ein paar kleine Fehler eingeschlichen, die ich mir erlaubte zu korrigieren.
Ich hoffe nur, dass es jetzt auch noch zu der Melodie passt.


Sunlight in the morning
When the new day doth begin
Finished is the time of dreaming
In the land of fantasy.

I open my closed eyes for the reality
And wish that the night-dreams true would be.

Moonlight in the evening
When the daytime starts to leave
Night is closing my eyes
For the dreams which will come to me.

They let me spend some hours away from reality
So softly they bring me in the land of fantasy.

So the times are changing
Every day and every night
Dreams let me forget
All the daytimes' fight.


Lieber Gruß
Julia
 



 
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