Black

Tartan

Mitglied
Black


Black, is an invisible colour.
A sad colour for some,
a secret and mysterious colour
for others.

It’s actually not a colour,
but an image of one.
Swallowing others,
always hungry for more.

But that’s ok, colours are like people.
The have different characteristics.
Each an individual mix,
but several the same basis.

Only black has a special symbolism.
Like sacrifice, mourning, loosing,
fear, sadness and depression.
It’s a rather pessimistic image.

For me, it doesn’t fulfill those attributes.
It means the comfort of hiding…
 

george

Mitglied
Hi, Tartan,

in general, I like the idea of black eating up the other colors like a black hole. Could you compress your complete sentences? Shorten? In the fist line, for example, you could omit "is" and so on.

"Black, an invisible colour.
A sad one for some,
secret and mysterious
for others."

Greetings
Jürgen
 

Schakim

Mitglied
Hi, Tartan!

Black is a beautiful colour,
because there will be
placed gold and silver
like the sun and the moon.
Look at the jewellery -
there will be a shining,
a contrast, a diving
in a cocoon -
Black is a dream
with every sunbeam!


Dreamy greetings through the night!
Schakim
 



 
Oben Unten