Hi Serge, thank you for the hint.
Indeed it is a repetition, and I thought about it.
My intention was to use the repetition as idensifier in a parallel structure.
I also tried some other phrases without this duplication but they did not work fine.
I am thinking about the problem.
As far as I see, the last is required as punch line.
I need a synonym for "of course" ...
... thinking ...
There was a young woman who cried
"Ich bin doch noch gar nicht soweit!"
Of course, she was German,
her victim was Herman,
of course, it is clear that she lied.
I think, this works:
There was a young woman who cried
"Ich bin doch noch gar nicht soweit!"
Obviously, she's German,
her victim was Herman,
of course, it is clear that she lied.