Dangerous night (Limerick)

Bernd

Bernd

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After synchronizing rhythm to limerick tune I liked it much.
It is possible, indeed, without changing the text.
 
C

Claustrophob

Mitglied
Yes, I think the key to the limerick rhythm is, to emphasize "you" in the third line - which is perfectly alright.

Thanks to Bernd's comments, I'm taking more care to follow the limerick rules more strictly. Thank you!
 
Bernd

Bernd

Foren-Redakteur
Teammitglied
Indeed it was the key.

Said an old butcher's lecherous wife:
"This night take me four times or five!
If you make it less,
I'd rather play chess
and cut off your balls with a knife!"


There is no rule violation.

But: I'd use the parallelity:


Said an old butcher's lecherous wife:
"This night take me four times or five!
If you'll make it less,
than I will play chess
and cut off your balls with a knife!"
 
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