Far away from all the pleasure (Poem Ed.)

Solitude
I know your face
Solitude
I remember your deed

Never leaving me
showing my tears around
throwing that shadow
forever on my ground

So far away from all the pleasure
hold my world to realize that breath
brake the curse to enter my thoughts
and you’ll see
I’m so far away from all the pleasure

Lonelyness
Your name is mine
Lonelyness
Your time is my everytime

Always watching me
taking control of my action
catching my possible release
no chance for any satisfaction

So far away from all the pleasure
stop my walk to end the torment
free my mind to free my spirit
and you’ll see
I’m so far away from all the pleasure

Ideas through the spinal of my life
never reaching the centre
Fate is blocking,
I’m blocking, I’m blocking, I’m blocking
until the idea disintegrates to nothing

Solitude
my spirit is called
Solitude
I am

So far away from all the pleasure

feel this lonelyness to draw my face
dig up this hopelessness to find my mind
now you see
I’m so far away from all the pleasure
so far, so far, so far...

Hm,

Kann man das noch ein bisschen straffen?
Für meinen Geschmack etwas zu lang

Hilft nicht viel was?

Liebe Grüße

Beccy