Gardenplace

Radiomaat

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Gardenplace

there`s one place
where I feel free
it`s a place
where I can be

covered with flowers
milliones and more
just like a paradise
a place to adore

I`m so pretty dazed
of this wonderful Gardenplace
come in to see
what you can`t believe

softly rustling brooks
lemon-yellow sun
friendly looking colours
glad relaxing calm

If you stay there
you can percive
loveley scents everywhere
get to know youre sense

I`m so pretty dazed
of this wonderful Gardenplace
come in to feel
and tast the harmony

Get rid of old pathes and try something new
and a new world is their waiting for you

Open your heart and open your mind
so if you wanna leave your sorrows behind

come into the Gardenplace

Songtext von "phone calls fish" (12/98)
 

Elmar

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Dear Radiomate,
like your poem. Exspecially expressed with the rhythm of the first two verses. Could be worth to make a try to continue with the rhythm?!
Best greetings, Elmar
 



 
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