Need to write it down (P.E. / A Tribute to Monster Magnet)

I'm still here in this business
in this word so dark and cold

Still waiting for that mistress
showing me where to go

Hold me, doubtful stranger
Hold me in your claws
My dreams are some kind of evil
my blood gets sucked up with straws

The tremble of my eyebrow
I need to write it down
The itching of that wound
I need to write it down
The world's about to drown
and I need to write it down


Okay, I know it's important
to realize when air gets thin

You know that I am mortal
so stop waiting for that sin

Hold me, bloodthirsty demon
Hold me with your teeth
My nightmares are unholy visions
of monsters fucking my bleeding beast

The tremble of my eyebrow
I need to write it down
The itching of that wound
I need to write it down
The world's about to drown
and I need to write it down
need to write that down
need to write it down


And I'm still here in this business
Inside the core of this painful sound
And I don't care if you read this
'cos I'm a king without his crown

The tremble of my eyebrow
I need to write it down
The itching of that wound
I need to write it down
Yeah... so deep and down
deep and down
deep and down
Falling endlessly
falling to the ground

Wow!
I guess it's not perfect, but I am impressed.
Who or what is "Monster Magnet"? Your poem reminds me of E.A. Poe.

greetinx, hellbender

Lyrics from hell

Thanks for your reply, Hellbender.
Monster Magnet is a US- American rock band. I had one of their songs in mind, as I was writing my songlyric- poem.
Also thank you for compare this to the good old Edgar-Allan.

Patrick