fragrance trip

Sand-be-wiched between two voluptuous
Southermn European women, while
stepping out of the metro, Serge
suddenly realizes the sagging
corners of his worry
mouth, which he tries of wipe off with
with both his forefimgers, as he thinks:
carp gills! His nose is sniffling
the throng of swapping odors,
female sweat, the tang from bared arm pits,
soap with olive oil, rose perfume, aroma
of coffee freshly brewed, smell
of warm pastries, all absorbed by
the fetor of a street late for
work on a day in mnoerning heat.

Sand-be-wiched between two voluptuous
Southern European women, while
stepping out of the metro, Serge
suddenly realizes the sagging
corners of his worry
mouth, which he tries of wipe off with
with both his forefingers, as he thinks:
carp gills! His nose is sniffling
the throng of swapping odors,
female sweat, the tang from bared arm pits,
soap with olive oil, rose perfume, aroma
of coffee freshly brewed, smell
of warm pastries, all absorbed by
the fetor of a street late for
work on a day in mnoerning heat.

Sand-be-wiched between two voluptuous
Southern European women, while
stepping out of the metro, Serge
suddenly realizes the sagging
corners of his worry
mouth, which he tries to wipe off
with both his forefingers, as he thinks:
carp gills! His nose is sniffling
the throng of swapping odors,
female sweat, the tang from bared arm pits,
soap with olive oil, rose perfume, aroma
of coffee freshly brewed, smell
of warm pastries, all absorbed by
the fetor of a street late for
work on a day in morning heat.

Gefällt mir gut, auch die Wortspiele, sofern ich sie richtig verstehe.
sand-be-wiched
bewitched
sandwiched

Ist ein halbes Jahr alt, also noch sehr jung.

as he thinks ist clumsy, sollte: thinking thein. Ansonsten geht es um Gerüche. ;-)

Danke!